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~Twisted Reality~Chapter One~The Storm~

Posted by hellsing2342 - March 10th, 2018


A small kid stands on the roof of a large mansion in the middle of the forest, while his brother stands below. The sky starts to darken as the small child's longish brown hair flies around in the wind, nearly knocking him down from his high perch.

"Ty! Get down before you fall down! And if you fall I'm just gonna laugh and say 'I told you so'!" The older boy on the ground called as his shorter brown hair is also flying around in the high speed wind, almost strong enough to pull him away as well. After a few more minutes the kid climbs down from the roof as the clouds above them seem to glow purple. "That's not normal lightning... We be-" Before he could even get the rest of his sentence out, a streak of purple lightning comes down from the sky, hitting his shoulder.

Ty, the younger of the two, jumps at the loud boom of the thunder before realizing that his brother was struck, he drags his brother inside. With some help he got his brother to their room and into bed, at this point the older of the two has a large, purplish black burn where he was struck and a high fever. Moments after a masked man helped to get Tyler's brother in bed, a tall man similar to the Slenderman entered the room, his normal grin disappearing almost instantly.

"Offender... somethings wrong with Kevin... and he isn't just sick... not like any fever I've ever seen..." The masked man says to the man who just entered the room.

"Yes Tim, that's quite obvious!" Offender yelled out, surprising himself with his raised voice. "Why am I so worked up? This kid hates me! I hate him too..." He automatically turned to leave before he heard a thud behind him when Tyler suddenly collapsed. "Ty?" Tyler seems to have a similar burn to that of his brother on his hand, but unlike Kevin, Tyler doesn't seem to be running a fever. After a few minutes of thinking, the masked guy figures it out, that they can't touch the burn or you end up with it as well, not understanding how that works. They get Tyler onto the bed as well, next to Kevin, and they both leave the room. It's not long before something strange starts to happen...

About two hours later, Tim, AKA Masky, returns to check up on the two of them and find Tyler isn't in bed and hears their shower running.

 

~~End Of Chapter~~


Comments

I like this! Although I have little to no knowledge about creepy pasta (other than the character names and how they look) this makes me want to learn more! Quick question, would you be willing to make a page with the characters names on it and include like a short backstory and description? Just a question and I don't expect you to do it. Thanks!

You mean my characters? Kevin and Tyler?
Cause they have a story all for them and AJ, Dylan, Rika, and Charles~

Yeah, I mean your characters.

I think I posted the first chapter of their story on here... chapter one is called Basement.

wow sing that's a interesting story i drew a few creepy pasta's a wile back but never aired them nor do i plan to!

Why not! I bet their good!